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i fell on the bed. my feet were running, but i stayed in one place. your eyes turned to pieces, and i wished i'd never been born, because life can't ...

thank you for the input. this was more an attempt to capture an emotional state than create a coherent plot with characters, conflict, etc.

there are some really pretty things here. wording is perfect in places. i hope more people read this and appreciate this.

This is fantasy. Let yourself go she said and took off all her clothes. She held my cock in her hands she said I'll suck you off I said I ...

there's no more.

I enter the room. It is a big room, yet it feels small, enclosed, and frightening. I am here to get help. Paranoia engulfs me. I am suffocating. I sit ...

the right words, the right level of mystery. i think we have all the information we need. good job.

This piece is called “Tears.” There will be 54 parts released within hours of each other. Some will work, some won’t. Taken as a whole, there will be little sense ...

click here for the first part I ran a girl over tonight. She was thin and beautiful with long blonde hair. The rain poured and poured and poured. I was ...

"their" not "there" i think this works, but the 8) 8) cheapens the effect somewhat.

hey!! i was wayyy drunk last night! i'm sorry for not being able to go to dinner with you guys, i thought i would go say hey to the guys ...

this was interesting to me in that it grabbed my attention (lots of things don't) but i think i might feel differently about it depending on whether it was based ...

i read these words and i think why bother i'll never be able to write something that aches and hurts as much as this. you have a singular talent. don't ...

a near-brilliant portrait of heartbreak. maybe the phone metaphor could be toned down a notch but i really love and understand what you're saying.

this is both angry and imperfect but the little imperfections here (spelling, grammar) can be forgiven in the face of such honest emotions. good job!